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library
Library includes the second r.
Beginner · Other / specialist pathway · English speaking and writing
Editing and responding to feedback
Edit meaning, grammar, spelling and punctuation in separate passes.
Original Kidemy beginner self-study unit · Learn the idea, try the practical activity and review your written answers. Practise spoken delivery with a teacher or proficient listener. Teacher-led course approval and booking are separate.
Learn the idea
Revision improves an idea; proofreading checks how it is written. Read once for sense and order, once for sentence grammar and once for spelling and punctuation. A changed answer should be checked again.
Worked example
“we was at the libary” becomes “We were at the library.” Changes: capital W, plural verb were, library spelling and a full stop.
- Check whether the reader can follow the idea.
- Check agreement and time.
- Check letters, capitals and punctuation last.
Your written practice
Show your working on paper and enter your answer here. If it does not match, compare the model and try again.
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were
We takes were.
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She has a book.
Add the initial capital and full stop.
Write in your own words. A guardian or teacher should review this response.
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My large bag is red.
Accept a sentence that keeps both details without needless repetition.
Write in your own words. A guardian or teacher should review this response.
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Meaning and order; subject-verb agreement; spelling and punctuation.
Check that the list covers ideas as well as surface corrections.
Before and after
Keep an original paragraph, create a revised version and explain two changes to a guardian or teacher.
Review with a guardian or teacher
- Preserve the intended message.
- Show a meaning improvement and a language correction.
- Explain the changes rather than only copying a model.
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