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carrots
The food is relevant to the rabbit.
Class 4 · English Medium · Pearson Edexcel · English
Planning and revising paragraphs
Explore planning and revising paragraphs with an example and your own answers.
Original Kidemy foundation practice · Read the example, write your answers, then check. This starter is shared across class versions; it is not a complete board-specific lesson or course.
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Plan a paragraph around one main idea. Revise the order and remove details that do not support that idea.
Worked example
For a paragraph about a pet rabbit, its food and shelter fit. A sentence about a bus timetable does not fit.
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How to start; what the player does; why I enjoy it.
Accept three relevant points in a useful order.
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My large bag is blue.
Accept a clear sentence combining both details without unnecessary repetition.
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Apply the idea in a new situation and explain your method. Open writing needs a guardian or teacher to review it.
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idea
Related details belong around one main idea.
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Therefore
Therefore links the wet path with the response.
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Bees visit flowers. They carry pollen between flowers.
Retain the linked sentences and make the pronoun reference clear.
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