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Class 4 · English Medium · Pearson Edexcel · English

Descriptive and narrative writing

Explore descriptive and narrative writing with an example and your own answers.

Original Kidemy foundation practice · Read the example, write your answers, then check. This starter is shared across class versions; it is not a complete board-specific lesson or course.

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Descriptions select details; narratives connect events. Choose precise verbs and organise events so a reader can follow them.

Worked example

“The puppy raced towards the gate” tells more than “The puppy went”.

  1. Read the example and explain which rule or evidence it uses.
  2. Try each task yourself, then compare the answer and its reason.

Your written practice

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sprinted

Sprinted means ran quickly.

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Dark clouds covered the sky. Strong winds bent the branches below.

Check connected sensory details; other descriptions can be valid.

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At dawn, Mina launched her little boat. Halfway across the pond, she noticed water coming in.

Check a setting, a character and a clear problem.

Take it further

Apply the idea in a new situation and explain your method. Open writing needs a guardian or teacher to review it.

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cold

Cold describes the mist.

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whispered

Add -ed to the regular verb.

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Ayan gripped the note. He took a slow breath and looked at the waiting audience.

Use observable actions rather than only naming a feeling.

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